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标题: 谁英文很好的，可以帮帮忙翻译这几句去英文吗？ [打印本页]

作者: alex2 时间: 2011-7-15 02:28 PM
标题: 谁英文很好的，可以帮帮忙翻译这几句去英文吗？
1】因为那时我的家里经济不好，所以我需要出来工作。

2】我的爱好是游泳，至少一个月会游一次。

3】我经常都有驾车的，最后一次驾车是在前2天。

4】因为我的合约结束了。

5】因为我有上网了解过你们的公司，我发现你们的公司工资和福利都很好。

6】我想问下工作时间是怎样分配的，工作性质是什么？

7】最后我想补充一下我是很有诚意加入贵公司和你们一起发展的，我希望你能给我个机会，我会尽力做到最好谢谢。

作者: sading94 时间: 2011-7-15 02:48 PM
本帖最后由 sading94 于 2011-7-15 02:49 PM 编辑

2.) my hobby is swimming , i swim at least once a month

作者: sading94 时间: 2011-7-15 02:48 PM
不懂对吗==“

作者: 暴君爱丽丝 时间: 2011-7-15 02:51 PM
本帖最后由暴君爱丽丝于 2011-7-15 02:55 PM 编辑

1】因为那时我的家里经济不好，所以我需要出来工作。
my family was facing financial problems, that's why I need to work.
2】我的爱好是游泳，至少一个月会游一次。
My hobby is swimming and I will swim at least once every month.
3】我经常都有驾车的，最后一次驾车是在前2天。
I've drive very often and the last time I drove was 2 days ago
4】因为我的合约结束了。
Because my contract has ended.
5】因为我有上网了解过你们的公司，我发现你们的公司工资和福利都很好。
I've try to browse for information about your company via the internet and I found out that the wage and welfare that you are offering is great.
6】我想问下工作时间是怎样分配的，工作性质是什么？
How do you schedule the working hour and what kind of tasks need to be performed for this job?
7】最后我想补充一下我是很有诚意加入贵公司和你们一起发展的，我希望你能给我个机会，我会尽力做到最好谢谢。I am really looking forward in joining your company which I hope that you can grant my wish and I'll do my best in serving you, thank you

作者: vyza 时间: 2011-7-15 02:53 PM
看起来是工作履历表哦...

作者: 暴君爱丽丝 时间: 2011-7-15 02:54 PM
被錄取的話要請我吃大餐！google tanslate不可靠，參考可以，可是不要100%跟哦。不要被它害了。

作者: crockdog 时间: 2011-7-15 03:16 PM

1】因为那时我的家里经济不好，所以我需要出来工作。

2】我的爱好是游泳，至少一个月会游一次。

3】 ...
alex2 发表于 2011-7-15 02:28 PM

看起来好像是在写cover letter哦。。为什么出来工作不用写。。hobby不用写。。你常开车，最后什么时候开车也不用写。。

作者: alex2 时间: 2011-7-15 03:59 PM
回复 7# crockdog

不是coverletter 啦，只是一些interview的东西你英文好吗，可以帮忙翻译一下吗谢谢

作者: alex2 时间: 2011-7-15 04:01 PM
回复 6# 暴君爱丽丝

好的谢谢你

作者: crockdog 时间: 2011-7-15 05:27 PM

回复 crockdog

不是coverletter 啦，只是一些interview的东西你英文好吗，可以帮忙翻译一下吗谢 ...
alex2 发表于 2011-7-15 03:59 PM

暴力爱丽丝翻译的不错。。但是有点错误。。
1】因为那时我的家里经济不好，所以我需要出来工作。
my family was facing financial problems, that's why I need to work.
2】我的爱好是游泳，至少一个月会游一次。
My hobby is swimming and I will swim at least once every month.
3】我经常都有驾车的，最后一次驾车是在前2天。
I drive very often and the last time I drove was 2 days ago
4】因为我的合约结束了。
Because my contract has ended.
5】因为我有上网了解过你们的公司，我发现你们的公司工资和福利都很好。
I've try to browse for information about your company via the internet and I found out that the wage and welfare that you are offering is great.
6】我想问下工作时间是怎样分配的，工作性质是什么？
What is the working hour and what is the job scope.
7】最后我想补充一下我是很有诚意加入贵公司和你们一起发展的，我希望你能给我个机会，我会尽力做到最好谢谢。I am really looking forward to join your company and I hope that you can take my application into consideration. I'll do my best in serving your company, thank you

作者: DejaVu26 时间: 2011-7-15 06:04 PM
还有：

that's why I need to work.
]那时=过去： that's why I needed to work

I will swim at least once every month.
习惯用现在一般时态就OK了： I swim at least once a month

I've try to browse for information about your company via the internet
have try 不符合语法
browse 是没有目的，不经意的翻阅
何不简单地说：I visited your website (on the Internet) and blah blah blah....

I am really looking forward to join
I look forward to joining ... (in joining 和 to join 都是是错误的）
有人说 I look forward to 是比较正式的；而 I am looking forward to 是比较不正式的

I'll do my best in serving your company
I'll do my best to serve ... 比较自然

作者: alex2 时间: 2011-7-15 06:16 PM
本帖最后由 alex2 于 2011-7-15 06:57 PM 编辑

回复 10# crockdog

谢谢你，你可以在帮我翻译最后一句吗

1】我有上网了解过你们公司，你们是一间很大规模的公司我觉得能加入你们公司和你们一起发展是我的荣幸，还有你们公司的工作时间和工作性质很适合我

作者: alex2 时间: 2011-7-15 06:57 PM
回复 11# DejaVu26

谢谢你，你可以在帮我翻译最后一句吗

1】我有上网了解过你们公司，你们是一间很大规模的公司我觉得能加入你们公司和你们一起发展是我的荣幸，还有你们公司的工作时间和工作性质很适合我

作者: DejaVu26 时间: 2011-7-15 10:56 PM
回复 13# alex2

I have learned from your website that you are a large company.
I would be honored to join your company and grow with it.
With my qualifications and experience, I feel/think that I’m suited for the job.

最后一句意思改了

作者: 【幸】好男生～Q 时间: 2011-7-16 02:40 PM
there was a financial difficulties, so i have to work for my family and life.

i love swimming, i would have it at least once a month.

i always drive, my last drove it was at two days ago.

because my contract is ends.

i have known the company on web, and the wages and benefits offered are so fine.

i want to know what is the work shift, and also the job description.

that would be an honour to me to work in the company and i am looking forward to it, i sincerly wish to have an opportunity, i will do my best in serving the company.

个人翻译，有错请改正

作者: 洋葱头/___\ 时间: 2012-6-9 11:38 PM
2.My hobby is swimming. I will go swimming at least once a month.
3.I always having a drive, 2 days a go is my last time of driving .

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