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我的作文十分的差 所以我背这篇作文来写 english papar 1 的Section B
这篇作文文法好吗?会拿高分吗?
As I steped into the house. I could not let me eyes to linger around the house. The house used to filled with happiness ,the house used to filled with sadness . "Now,you go to unpack your thing first" I talked to a little girl . I walked toward the kitchen ,my lips curved upward as the sweet memories surged into my mind in a sudden . I toke up the photograph on the table, what I saw pained my heart hardly . In a flash, memories of the past clicked into place pieces by pieces , forming a blissful picture in my past . I still remembered vivily, our first encouter, our love.
The person in the photograph was my husband , his name was John . We
knew each other in a college . We studied the same course . He was as though my brother who would take care and concern about me. He was good-looking and quite lanky in height . His charming eyes to go with his pointed nose and thin lips ,wow, such an awesome man ! His study built and well-tanned colour of skin had caught many young girl heart. As the time passed, I starting developing feeling towards him. I thought he would never love me, however, what he said was surprising me " I have falled in love with you at the first encounter . Do you remember our first encounter?"Of course I would remember . The rainy day , and the first time he held my hand and ran towards the college because both of us did not bring umbrella . "Could you be my girlfriend ?" he confessed again. I shed tears of joy because I knew that I was not one-sided love.
After we graduated , he seeking me in marriage . That day, he advanced towards me and knelt down in front my friends, I was dumbfounded because he did not do anything wrong . In a whiff , he toke out the ring and proposed to me . I froze momentarily ,but at the next seconds , tears of joy rolled down my cheeks drop by drop . I knew,I knew,I knew, I was the most blissful women in this world ! After getting married , we moved into our new house . The house that he bought for us . A few years later,our angel had born . Our daughter , Angel . For us , she was just like an angle whom brought happiness for us . My family was just completed for her appearance.
However , life was not all sunshines and rainbows . John was suffered from critical disease which was bone cancer, and at the critical stage . I still remember clearly that before he passed away , he thew me a last-long look. I knew he was worried about me . At the moments , tears streaming down my cheeks freely, I knew I would lost him forever. After being against with the disease for three years, John had passed away . I feeling blue and miserable because I had lost the man . I loved the most in this world . For me, he was everything in my life . I could not live without him.
The person helped me to walk out from the woeful condition was my girl, angel. She wiped off the tears that drifing down on my cheek and she said she would protect me, She would replaced her farther to protect me. I was awaken , I had not alone . John had left a special gift for me , it was our daughter angel . I promise myself that I would love myself as John love me, as she love me .
"Mom..." a gentle voice pulled me back reality. Once again, tears welled my eyes . I put the photograph on my bag and buried Angle into my chest " Have you done? " I inquired . "Don't leave anything inside this house" I added on . I decided move to another city and starting a new life . I thought , this was the only way to let myself walked out from sadness.
"Let's go, Angel" I said and held her hand . Goodbye, John . We walked out the house together. |
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