谁英文很好的，可以帮帮忙翻译这几句去英文吗？

DejaVu26

还有：

that's why I need to work.
]那时=过去： that's why I needed to work

I will swim at least once every month.
习惯用现在一般时态就OK了： I swim at least once a month

I've try to browse for information about your company via the internet
have try 不符合语法
browse 是没有目的，不经意的翻阅
何不简单地说：I visited your website (on the Internet) and blah blah blah....

I am really looking forward to join
I look forward to joining ... (in joining 和 to join 都是是错误的）
有人说 I look forward to 是比较正式的；而 I am looking forward to 是比较不正式的

I'll do my best in serving your company
I'll do my best to serve ... 比较自然

alex2

回复 10# crockdog


    谢谢你，你可以在帮我翻译最后一句吗

1】 我有上网了解过你们公司，你们是一间很大规模的公司我觉得能加入你们公司和你们一起发展是我的荣幸，还有你们公司的工作时间和工作性质很适合我

alex2

回复 11# DejaVu26


    谢谢你，你可以在帮我翻译最后一句吗

1】 我有上网了解过你们公司，你们是一间很大规模的公司我觉得能加入你们公司和你们一起发展是我的荣幸，还有你们公司的工作时间和工作性质很适合我

DejaVu26

回复 13# alex2

I have learned from your website that you are a large company.
I would be honored to join your company and grow with it.
With my qualifications and experience, I feel/think that I’m suited for the job.

最后一句意思改了

【幸】好男生～Q

there was a financial difficulties, so i have to work for my family and life.

i love swimming, i would have it at least once a month.

i always drive, my last drove it was at two days ago.

because my contract is ends.

i have known the company on web, and the wages and benefits offered are so fine.

i want to know what is the work shift, and also the job description.

that would be an honour to me to work in the company and i am looking forward to it, i sincerly wish to have an opportunity, i will do my best in serving the company.

个人翻译，有错请改正

洋葱头/___\

2.My hobby is swimming. I will go swimming at least once a month.
3.I always having a drive, 2 days a go is my last time of driving .